Re: Socialising for Beginners

@Hello  @Bunniekins  You ask me  for a poem and I did promise you room service,   You spoke of your  inner child,   the 7 foot man,  a defensive shield, my guess. and wolves.   You have an abstract image mind, so I chanced an abstract painting.

 

I I struggled in north Canada for a couple of years while a lady I new struggled on the streets of   Boston.  Letters was all we had,  and neither of us made it through.   So some of your words took me back to that time,  and didn't want to leave it on the music thread.

 

                WOLF AND THE HAWK.

  

     Cries of white wolves       cold mountain nights

     Funeral fires fuelled  by love letters  delights.

 

     Satin   eyes               silk web sighs

         unwanted hands     on unwilling  thighs

 

                         White wolves  beyond city lights   .  .  . .

          -   -    -     -     -     -    -    -    -  --    - -     -

 

        Cries of white hawks        nests  made of steel

              Timber wolves  culling  the fake  from real

                                  flowers  and truths that  you feel

                  _         _         _           _       _        _   _

 

         Wolf dreams of far  away  lands

               Silent  the phones  in our  hands

           Serenade  choirs    of  stony  faced  liars

          Dinner dates  strangled   on webs  of  barb wires

                                  Hawk   knows   what   true  love  demands

                 _        _       _             _             _        _

 

           White  feather takes to  the  wing

              On trades  winds  sweet  promises  bring

                  Snow  storms       of ice  thorns

                     Weans  weak  from  new-born's

                 The  tempests   lost  songs  she cant  sing.

       _          _            _         _                       _       _

 

             Purity   claims  its  full  price

                  Surrenders  her  life   to  the ice

              So  choose  death in   snow

               For  well  do  we  know

            Ice   canyons    ghosts   live   their  love    twice .  .  .        tonys  moon base   1

 

 

 

       Worlds would I trade to feel just a heart beat of absolute.  .  .purity. 

       and thankyou   @Bunniekins    for letting me  spill all that

 

     @Dimity   hope you will accept this in exchange of that poem you gave me,

        Hello to   @Appleblossom    and    @amber22 .  @Thyme 

                  

           

 

 

 

   

 

 

          

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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@tonys   what a beautiful poem thank you for sharing it with me and all who venture on this forum.  x

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Gosh that's a powerful poem @tonys . Wolves and hawks... two top predators many loath and fear but I have the utmost admiration and respect for... in an icy winter wonderland as bleak as the lonely lives of the distant lovers

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Hello @Bunniekins I haven't seen you for ages... maybe we've been in separate corners of the forums. Hope you're doing OK.

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@Dimity   hi Dimity i have been around at the music forum.  good to see you.x

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Thankyou @Dimity     Yes  I guess you saw through to the second layer,  . .   In despair    another  dear friend  lost to  substance abuse.     Writing some thing and staying 

  in the sane forum   rules  presents more of a challenge than the writing,    'which I like'    so thankyou for.  .  . accepting.   

hope you are well,    and  I'm still enjoying the poem you sent me.   have a great weekend

                                 tonys moon base 1 

        

                      

 

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Ah. I haven't been on the music forum. I mostly listen to folk, classical and world music @Bunniekins 

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My heart goes out to you @tonys . You have a great weekend too... if you're not still picking fruit

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thankyou  @Bunniekins    I  guess you gathered from it,   my lady friend  fell victim to the drug epidemic  over there,   but its hard to contain emotions in a jar of words.   But,   you  gave me a few ideas,   so thanks mate.   Room service ,         as promised.

 

Nails sound lovely mate.    anything that give a boost hey.    Hope you are well .   tonys m b 1  

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Thankyou  @Dimity    I  always forget to say when I write something a bit  " grey "   that  I'm 

happier than Santa,   and those are just memories from long ago,  but  It  revealed what a thoughtful,  kind,  person  you are.    Picking is busy,  but I have to confess,  I'm a bit old for it now,  and I mostly hug the tractor and forklift.  Hopefully  will be my last year on the farm.

 

You have a really great weekend to,   Bag of smiles,    tonys  m  b  1