17-03-2023 06:03 PM - edited 17-03-2023 06:07 PM
17-03-2023 06:03 PM - edited 17-03-2023 06:07 PM
@Hello @Bunniekins You ask me for a poem and I did promise you room service, You spoke of your inner child, the 7 foot man, a defensive shield, my guess. and wolves. You have an abstract image mind, so I chanced an abstract painting.
I I struggled in north Canada for a couple of years while a lady I new struggled on the streets of Boston. Letters was all we had, and neither of us made it through. So some of your words took me back to that time, and didn't want to leave it on the music thread.
WOLF AND THE HAWK.
Cries of white wolves cold mountain nights
Funeral fires fuelled by love letters delights.
Satin eyes silk web sighs
unwanted hands on unwilling thighs
White wolves beyond city lights . . . .
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Cries of white hawks nests made of steel
Timber wolves culling the fake from real
flowers and truths that you feel
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Wolf dreams of far away lands
Silent the phones in our hands
Serenade choirs of stony faced liars
Dinner dates strangled on webs of barb wires
Hawk knows what true love demands
_ _ _ _ _ _
White feather takes to the wing
On trades winds sweet promises bring
Snow storms of ice thorns
Weans weak from new-born's
The tempests lost songs she cant sing.
_ _ _ _ _ _
Purity claims its full price
Surrenders her life to the ice
So choose death in snow
For well do we know
Ice canyons ghosts live their love twice . . . tonys moon base 1
Worlds would I trade to feel just a heart beat of absolute. . .purity.
and thankyou @Bunniekins for letting me spill all that
@Dimity hope you will accept this in exchange of that poem you gave me,
Hello to @Appleblossom and @amber22 . @Thyme
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17-03-2023 07:24 PM
17-03-2023 07:24 PM
@tonys what a beautiful poem thank you for sharing it with me and all who venture on this forum. x
17-03-2023 07:31 PM
17-03-2023 07:31 PM
Gosh that's a powerful poem @tonys . Wolves and hawks... two top predators many loath and fear but I have the utmost admiration and respect for... in an icy winter wonderland as bleak as the lonely lives of the distant lovers
17-03-2023 07:33 PM
17-03-2023 07:33 PM
Hello @Bunniekins I haven't seen you for ages... maybe we've been in separate corners of the forums. Hope you're doing OK.
17-03-2023 08:49 PM
17-03-2023 08:49 PM
@Dimity hi Dimity i have been around at the music forum. good to see you.x
17-03-2023 08:55 PM
17-03-2023 08:55 PM
Thankyou @Dimity Yes I guess you saw through to the second layer, . . In despair another dear friend lost to substance abuse. Writing some thing and staying
in the sane forum rules presents more of a challenge than the writing, 'which I like' so thankyou for. . . accepting.
hope you are well, and I'm still enjoying the poem you sent me. have a great weekend
tonys moon base 1
17-03-2023 09:05 PM
17-03-2023 09:05 PM
Ah. I haven't been on the music forum. I mostly listen to folk, classical and world music @Bunniekins
17-03-2023 09:08 PM
17-03-2023 09:08 PM
My heart goes out to you @tonys . You have a great weekend too... if you're not still picking fruit
17-03-2023 09:25 PM
17-03-2023 09:25 PM
thankyou @Bunniekins I guess you gathered from it, my lady friend fell victim to the drug epidemic over there, but its hard to contain emotions in a jar of words. But, you gave me a few ideas, so thanks mate. Room service , as promised.
Nails sound lovely mate. anything that give a boost hey. Hope you are well . tonys m b 1
17-03-2023 11:52 PM
17-03-2023 11:52 PM
Thankyou @Dimity I always forget to say when I write something a bit " grey " that I'm
happier than Santa, and those are just memories from long ago, but It revealed what a thoughtful, kind, person you are. Picking is busy, but I have to confess, I'm a bit old for it now, and I mostly hug the tractor and forklift. Hopefully will be my last year on the farm.
You have a really great weekend to, Bag of smiles, tonys m b 1
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